I came across your publication in Notes and am so happy I decided to give this story a go!! I’m hooked. I love how you told the story of the hole, and then we must begin again, and the story begin-begins. Looking forward to reading part two!
Welcome aboard! I know there are so many great stories on Substack so I’m honored you’d give mine a chance. Going Home has now been published in its entirety so feel free to keep going; each chapter has a link to the next one at the end.
What I love about this is the strength of the writing voice. You are assured in your words, in the sentence structure and rhythm. And, you dog, you have sucked me in, made me interested, compelled me to read the next part. All things good. All things a writer should do.
My only quibble is your music choice. I listened to only a few bars and was quite surprised; to me it did not fit the tone and melody you were creating. But, alas, I can choose to not listen to it, so it's not a quibble at all!
I came across your publication in Notes and am so happy I decided to give this story a go!! I’m hooked. I love how you told the story of the hole, and then we must begin again, and the story begin-begins. Looking forward to reading part two!
Welcome aboard! I know there are so many great stories on Substack so I’m honored you’d give mine a chance. Going Home has now been published in its entirety so feel free to keep going; each chapter has a link to the next one at the end.
What I love about this is the strength of the writing voice. You are assured in your words, in the sentence structure and rhythm. And, you dog, you have sucked me in, made me interested, compelled me to read the next part. All things good. All things a writer should do.
My only quibble is your music choice. I listened to only a few bars and was quite surprised; to me it did not fit the tone and melody you were creating. But, alas, I can choose to not listen to it, so it's not a quibble at all!
Nicely done. And now, to Part II