I thought the section where Nani relinquishes her claim and goes to reconcile with Suli was a bit. abrupt. Perhaps more of a lead-up to show Nani's sense of loyalty, that friendship means more than dishonor. Even opening a window to the debate inside herself before she makes the decision to support Suli.
You continue to hold me. I want to know how this turns out. Nice.
another turn, excellent. ...
I thought the section where Nani relinquishes her claim and goes to reconcile with Suli was a bit. abrupt. Perhaps more of a lead-up to show Nani's sense of loyalty, that friendship means more than dishonor. Even opening a window to the debate inside herself before she makes the decision to support Suli.
You continue to hold me. I want to know how this turns out. Nice.